April 8, 2009
I have finished revising and at last completing Part Two of Looming Thunderheads. I didn’t change any of the action, mostly I adjusted how the characters interacted with each other and what information they shared. I adjusted Pah-Tukh’s emotional arc so that he would be in the right place when he got to that last chapter. It is not yet right, but it is closer, and that is good enough. I know that I will spend a few months after I finish this draft honing and revising in a more line-by-line manner to get a lot of those details right. As it stands, I am ready to embark on Part Three. I have been looking forward to the first chapter of Part Three for a while now, as I really like the version I had in the original draft. I think the rest of the book will go more swiftly, as most of it is already written in disparate form. I just have to put it together and add a few scenes here and there. We shall see.
Filed under The Redemption Saga.
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